Task 10
Hi all — hope you had a great holiday !!
Your first task for this term is to choose one event from your holiday and retell it as if you observed it rather than were part of it !!! Try to choose one thing only and not a string of events leading up to the thing you want to write about !!
Aim to write about 2-300 words.
I am still getting round to reading and commenting on everyones blogs but I will get there.
Also, this is the scale/criteria I will be using as part of your end of term assessment — we have discussed this in class but here is a guide to the marks you will recieve. Please ensure all work is completed by the end of Week 3 and I will endeavour to comment on everyones blogs as soon as I can.
If you are having trouble with your blogs do the work in your journal and make sure you show it to me before the end of Week 3.
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Grade |
Mark |
Criteria |
| A | 10 | Has completed all tasks, and may or may not have done extra work such as decorations or extra writing. Has good sentences structure and vocabulary, shows evidence of research, and explores topics in depth. |
| 9 | ||
| B | 8 | Has completed most tasks, although may be missing some, entires are generally short but some show more indepth discussion. |
| 7 | ||
| 6 | ||
| C | 5 | Has not completed many tasks but those compeletd are indepth and well written. Majority of completed tasks are not indepth. |
| 4 | ||
| 3 | ||
| D | 2 | Little or no attempt to complete tasks either at school or home. May have started blog but it is empty. |
| 1 |
October 28, 2006 @ 5:38 am
Hey Miss M
Ive finished Task 10. Went a bit over the 300 word limit, not much though. See you at school!
November 8, 2006 @ 3:19 am
Hey Miss M
I have finished task 10. Thanks
Cya at school
November 9, 2006 @ 3:00 am
hey miss M.
i told you today i would be coming home to finish the work cause i wasnt feeling to good this afternoon. so i have completed task 10. i think there are 247 words or something. thanks, see you tomorro.
November 13, 2006 @ 2:06 am
hey ms M.
I’ve finished task 10.
November 20, 2006 @ 10:18 pm
I’ve finished task 10, thanks Ms M.